i am postponing the Animu Boston: Chinese Porno Cartoon Tragedy writeup for a few days, mostly because my brain is still a pile of slush swimming in beer and liquor, and also i forgot my camera so i am hoping other people will upload pictures of some of the fab things i saw/did over the weekend.
I BET YOU ARE ALL TERRIBLY DISAPPOINTED.
so i am going to shower you all with
We can all feel a little sucky about our writing ability sometimes. So this is the meme to try and deal with that. Comment here and I'll give you detailed love for as many of your fics as I can. Afterwards, post this in your own LJ and spread the love.
I EXPECT MANY COMMENTS FROM MY MORE WRITER-LY EL-JAY FRIENDS. EVEN IF YOU'VE ALREADY RESPONDED TO SOMEONE ELSE'S. EVEN IF YOU ONLY HAVE ONE FIC TO YOUR NAME. THERE IS LOVE
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Date: 2010-04-10 08:50 pm (UTC)From:There's so much I love about your writing, both in style and plotting, but what really sticks out is the way you set a scene. Interregnum has a palpable sense of dread from the opening line, This is your Happy Ever After has joy practically bursting under the surface, and Nine Months feels...not confused but there is a real feel of disorientation/surprise in each chapter. On a 'macro' level there is also a great deal of well-done world building in Interregnum that is also presented in a very readable manner (unlike some writers, who have richly detailed worlds presented with all the eloquence of a history textbook
coughtolkiencough).Your dialog between characters is wonderful to read. Writing uh...i guess i'd have to call it 'witty banter' is difficult - more often than not, verbal duels tend to come off as forced and predictable, where the conversation has an obvious progression and conclusion. The conversations between Ivy and Siegfried are always a surprise; I never find any of the 'tells' that so often plague one-on-one conversations. The progression feels natural and unexpected at once.
I also admire the sexual undercurrents you put in your scenes - Ivy waking up Siegfried in the latest chapter in Interregnum comes to mind. Very sexually charged without using explicit language, and the way the tension is left unresolved makes the resulting 'sparring match' much more intense, both emotionally and physically.
BASCIALLY you are a wonderful writer and i am always glad to see new stuff from you, even if i am a bad e-friend and don't always comment ;(
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Date: 2010-04-13 10:09 pm (UTC)From: