Argh! And this is just a rough draft?? The tension and the sensual undercurrent just makes me want to bite huge chunks out of it! If you left it as is, I think it would finish quite naturally there, with that lovely little frisson of knowing exactly what's going to come next.:D
I also second Kizna about the dress, is jealous. (Also wonders if she may also have to draw her own adorable family fanart to go with her own preferred pairing *sigh*)
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Date: 2009-10-11 10:57 am (UTC)From:I also second Kizna about the dress, is jealous. (Also wonders if she may also have to draw her own adorable family fanart to go with her own preferred pairing *sigh*)