ten genres, ten sentences, ten words each.
i tried this writing meme before and failed miserably. staying within the given restrictions i...still fail, but not quite so much. i mean, at least now i have an excuse for sucking: i cannot be brief, ever. EVER.
did some mixing-and-matching with various genre lists floating around, so the lists are not identical. may try this a few more times, for characterization purposes, also to develop writing that is not quite so bombastic. :|
Ratings/Warnings: R, for suggestions of sex, and Raphael/Amy (i am going to fandom hell, i know it.)
1. UST
The claw clutches his thigh. Siegfried shudders; Soul Edge watches.
2. Death of Romance
Holding bloodstained treasure, he thinks: this is not my dream.
3. First Time
He's afraid to touch Ivy - more afraid to refuse her.
4. Hurt/Comfort
"I've got you," Hilde says.
Siegfried falls to his knees.
5. Alternate Universe
When he wakes, he's human again; Soul Edge is gone.
6. Childhood
"Bastard," they call him; Siegfried swears he'll make them pay.
7. Humor
"I don't understand - what do you mean, calling it 'compensation?'"
8. Horror
The girl begs for mercy. His claw crushes her skull.
9. Angst
He stares at the stars, wondering - do I belong here?
10. Smut
Siegfried shoves aside volumnious skirts, teases willing flesh; Hilde gasps.
---
1. Death of Romance
No beauty, macabre or otherwise - only a torn, bloody throat.
2. Hurt/comfort
Raphael's never treated fevers, but he and Amy manage somehow.
3. Character Death
"You cannot leave me -" but he can't stop the bleeding -
4. Crack
Raphael discovers a drunkard's blood is a remarkably potent substance.
5. First Time
She wilts as he enters; is this all there is?
6. Humor
"No, it's a metaphor. You'd make a terrible dancer anyway."
7. Alternate Universe
"Hello, mother, father -" Raphael unsheathes Soul Edge, "I've come home."
8. Smut
He strokes the golden head between his legs, sighs. "You're mine."
9. WAFF
Amy's too old for piggyback rides.
Raphael gives them anyway.
10. Angst
He gulps water, wine, anything, desperately; his mouth stays dry.
---
1. UST
Amy can't hear Raphael's words; his lips are too distracting.
2. Character Death
Raphael's heart does not beat. Amy forgets how to breathe.
3. Childhood
She remembers her parents coughing, the night before they died.
4. Angst
Amy waits by the window everyday; the road stays empty.
5. Horror
"Why?" Her governess weeps.
"You're stupid."
Blood paints Albion red.
6. Alternate Universe
"He's here -" she points, turning away from horrified blue eyes.
7. First time
"You can't," Raphael whispers.
She kisses his throat. "I must."
8. Crack
"I have...a secret."
Amy pulls out the Magical Wand.
9. Hurt/comfort
Amy wraps the bandage poorly, frowns.
"It's fine," Raphael says.
10. WAFF
"H-happy birthday," Amy stammers, dumping the bouquet in Raphael's lap.
---
1. Death of Romance
Her father falls, mouth frothing; this is Hilde's coronation ceremony.
2. First time
No triumph is sweeter than her name on Siegfried's lips.
3. Character death
"No one blocks my path."
Hilde pierces the monster's heart.
4. Horror
Hilde stands upon the battlements, watching the dark, rising tide.
5. humor
Hilde readies her lance, and -
- trips on her skirt hem.
6. Hurt/comfort
"How did he die?" the soldier's weeping mother asks.
"Bravely."
7. Angst
"We might die."
Nothing Hilde says can blunt that truth.
8. Childhood
"Falling stars!" Hilde points; her father smiles.
"Only, they're red..."
9. UST
"Yes, I can polish a sword - Siegfried, are you...laughing?"
10. Drama
Her aunt demands the crown; this is Hilde's first battle.
---
i have never hated conjunctions so much.
i tried this writing meme before and failed miserably. staying within the given restrictions i...still fail, but not quite so much. i mean, at least now i have an excuse for sucking: i cannot be brief, ever. EVER.
did some mixing-and-matching with various genre lists floating around, so the lists are not identical. may try this a few more times, for characterization purposes, also to develop writing that is not quite so bombastic. :|
Ratings/Warnings: R, for suggestions of sex, and Raphael/Amy (i am going to fandom hell, i know it.)
1. UST
The claw clutches his thigh. Siegfried shudders; Soul Edge watches.
2. Death of Romance
Holding bloodstained treasure, he thinks: this is not my dream.
3. First Time
He's afraid to touch Ivy - more afraid to refuse her.
4. Hurt/Comfort
"I've got you," Hilde says.
Siegfried falls to his knees.
5. Alternate Universe
When he wakes, he's human again; Soul Edge is gone.
6. Childhood
"Bastard," they call him; Siegfried swears he'll make them pay.
7. Humor
"I don't understand - what do you mean, calling it 'compensation?'"
8. Horror
The girl begs for mercy. His claw crushes her skull.
9. Angst
He stares at the stars, wondering - do I belong here?
10. Smut
Siegfried shoves aside volumnious skirts, teases willing flesh; Hilde gasps.
---
1. Death of Romance
No beauty, macabre or otherwise - only a torn, bloody throat.
2. Hurt/comfort
Raphael's never treated fevers, but he and Amy manage somehow.
3. Character Death
"You cannot leave me -" but he can't stop the bleeding -
4. Crack
Raphael discovers a drunkard's blood is a remarkably potent substance.
5. First Time
She wilts as he enters; is this all there is?
6. Humor
"No, it's a metaphor. You'd make a terrible dancer anyway."
7. Alternate Universe
"Hello, mother, father -" Raphael unsheathes Soul Edge, "I've come home."
8. Smut
He strokes the golden head between his legs, sighs. "You're mine."
9. WAFF
Amy's too old for piggyback rides.
Raphael gives them anyway.
10. Angst
He gulps water, wine, anything, desperately; his mouth stays dry.
---
1. UST
Amy can't hear Raphael's words; his lips are too distracting.
2. Character Death
Raphael's heart does not beat. Amy forgets how to breathe.
3. Childhood
She remembers her parents coughing, the night before they died.
4. Angst
Amy waits by the window everyday; the road stays empty.
5. Horror
"Why?" Her governess weeps.
"You're stupid."
Blood paints Albion red.
6. Alternate Universe
"He's here -" she points, turning away from horrified blue eyes.
7. First time
"You can't," Raphael whispers.
She kisses his throat. "I must."
8. Crack
"I have...a secret."
Amy pulls out the Magical Wand.
9. Hurt/comfort
Amy wraps the bandage poorly, frowns.
"It's fine," Raphael says.
10. WAFF
"H-happy birthday," Amy stammers, dumping the bouquet in Raphael's lap.
---
1. Death of Romance
Her father falls, mouth frothing; this is Hilde's coronation ceremony.
2. First time
No triumph is sweeter than her name on Siegfried's lips.
3. Character death
"No one blocks my path."
Hilde pierces the monster's heart.
4. Horror
Hilde stands upon the battlements, watching the dark, rising tide.
5. humor
Hilde readies her lance, and -
- trips on her skirt hem.
6. Hurt/comfort
"How did he die?" the soldier's weeping mother asks.
"Bravely."
7. Angst
"We might die."
Nothing Hilde says can blunt that truth.
8. Childhood
"Falling stars!" Hilde points; her father smiles.
"Only, they're red..."
9. UST
"Yes, I can polish a sword - Siegfried, are you...laughing?"
10. Drama
Her aunt demands the crown; this is Hilde's first battle.
---
i have never hated conjunctions so much.
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Date: 2009-09-03 06:43 pm (UTC)From:Siegfried:
1. Omg! (squicks)
3. I think I must write this. XD
7. Rofl!! (you can just tell he's think 'compensation for what?')
8. WOW...just WOW (is my very favorite; clean, concise, beautiful)
Raphael:
9. Adorable! XD
10. More WOW. (is there a word for angst that is wow?)
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Date: 2009-09-04 04:58 am (UTC)From:1. ...i blame this fic!
3. YOU SHOULD ;D
7. compensation jokes are never not funny :3
8. i like this one too. it's the only one that's truly self-contained, a complete thought. all the others read as fragments of a larger idea, which is probably inevitable in a ten word sentence, but still! it's pretty fulfilling, to say everything you need to in a small space.
everything i wrote for Raphael categorically refused to be contained in ten words, AARRGH. i think it's the weaker set, just because nearly every sentence requires a lot of filling in on the reader's part.
...and i am irrationally fond of 'Crack.' :3