So you are the great writer who did this great story called "A father and his child" on Fanfiction.net as well as this one!
I have to say that all of your writings are amazingly great and you are eventually one of my favourite and precious writers!
Your descriptions are simply wonderful, the characterizations are exactly like I see them, just like I write them on my own way (though I am a French writer). I am currently reading some of your works and each time, I am captivated by your vocabulary, by all scenes I can perfectly imagine...
I can perceive the strong bonds between the Sorels, the emotions Raphael feels for his beloved Amy, how he'll always be there for her, protects her so much. I also can see her tender feelings for her foster father, how strong she wants to appear and yet, still sensible... Inseparable bonds, a great pride. I love the way that she has more importance in your stories compared to others from different authors.
I also appreciate the corrupted mind you give to Raphael, how he is interacting, evolving in madness and thirst, his soul stained by the evil seeds.
Siegfried, the great knight that I totally ship with the dark Lord for so much history. There is such delicious darkness and crimson sensuality in this pairing which we never know what to expect from it... We can feel love, hate, power, regret...
Also no censured parts, which is really interesting!
In conclusion, I enjoyed everything you created so far and I wish that you will continue about it! Those are really enjoying works for the eyes and merits to be read again and again.
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Date: 2010-04-19 11:23 am (UTC)From:So you are the great writer who did this great story called "A father and his child" on Fanfiction.net as well as this one!
I have to say that all of your writings are amazingly great and you are eventually one of my favourite and precious writers!
Your descriptions are simply wonderful, the characterizations are exactly like I see them, just like I write them on my own way (though I am a French writer). I am currently reading some of your works and each time, I am captivated by your vocabulary, by all scenes I can perfectly imagine...
I can perceive the strong bonds between the Sorels, the emotions Raphael feels for his beloved Amy, how he'll always be there for her, protects her so much. I also can see her tender feelings for her foster father, how strong she wants to appear and yet, still sensible... Inseparable bonds, a great pride. I love the way that she has more importance in your stories compared to others from different authors.
I also appreciate the corrupted mind you give to Raphael, how he is interacting, evolving in madness and thirst, his soul stained by the evil seeds.
Siegfried, the great knight that I totally ship with the dark Lord for so much history. There is such delicious darkness and crimson sensuality in this pairing which we never know what to expect from it... We can feel love, hate, power, regret...
Also no censured parts, which is really interesting!
In conclusion, I enjoyed everything you created so far and I wish that you will continue about it! Those are really enjoying works for the eyes and merits to be read again and again.
With kind regards,
~Bloody Funeral