NaBloPoMo Day 21: Critique

Ugh. I have a headache from sitting in an auto garage for two hours and I started cooking my first meal of the day at 8:30pm.

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In not annoying whiny girl news, a friend pointed me in the direction of a writing program called Autocrit; it's essentially an automated beta reader. I've never made use of a beta before (too shy and paranoid, lol) so I was curious to see if this program would be of any use.

( And it turned out to be quite helpful )

I would suggest trying it just for fun/curiosity's sake. and if you try the full version tell me what it's like o3o